Kia Ora Today I have been making a poster about ANZAC and it is a very important to celebrate because they are very special to us because they were fighting for our land.
I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Monday, 20 April 2020
Wednesday, 26 February 2020
HAVING LOTS OF FUN
Tuesday, 25 February 2020
Friday, 21 February 2020
Writing
Descriptive Setting
Make a copy and then write a paragraph describing the picture below
Checklist
I have thought about what this place looks like, and might sound like and feel like.
I have used adjectives (describing words)
I have used adverbs (words that describe a verb/doing word)
I have used figurative language (e.g. similes)
I have used a thesaurus to find more interesting words
I have re-read my writing to check for mistakes.
I see UFO’s everywhere around the city.
I see city breaking down and also places too.
UFO’s taking over the land.
Cloudy and smoke surrounding everyone.
Some city broken and some not .
Search lights finding people or criminals.
Dark lights everywhere so you cant see.
People that is about to die from these bad UFO’s
Sunday, 21 October 2018
Wednesday, 12 September 2018
Friday, 7 September 2018
Wednesday, 5 September 2018
Tuesday, 4 September 2018
Monday, 3 September 2018
Predators.
This week we were learning about predators killing our native birds and this is my opinion.
Monday, 13 August 2018
Azahlyah's Argument.
This week we were learning "should dogs be allowed on public transport"?
And this is mine.
Thursday, 21 June 2018
The firefighter
Descriptive Writing.
The fire fighters.
One afternoon a boy named Harry was a fan of fire fighters.So he got up his courage and asked his mum if he can go to see the fire fighters on his seventh birthday.
Till his mum said ‘‘NO!’’ “we were planning something even better than that”But he was so angry that he was going for a walk to catch his breath and then he brought a pack of matches and set a gigantic bulldozer on fire.Then ran around a corner.
He was so terrified that he ran away and was so scared he was about to cry.He ran home and told his mum what happened but when he was about to say it the mum just turn on the TV and she saw the news and was so terrified too.Harry said “I was going to tell you what happened” and was about to say that he was the one who set fire on the bulldozer.
He apologized and his mum took him to the firefighters to apologize and he had a chance to have ride with them .
This week we were doing a descriptive writing and this is mine.
Friday, 15 June 2018
Descriptive Writing.
Descriptive Writing.
Wonder woman has a metal suit,a shield to protect her,she two big bracelets to help her for when she is traped by Supervillans and also a sword too.
She behaves by being kind to people and saving the world.she is helpful and she uses a golden rope and ties it around people and it burns them until it tells lies.Wonder Woman is a 2017 American superhero. But I think that she is a superhero for around the whole entire world but not including. Intataca, and other places that people can last in.
Wonder woman has 4 types of weapons magic tiara that's like a boomerang,ultiliting earrings alow where to breathe in outer space,unbreakable bracelets if you remove them The owner the gave her them will be angry at her,and a lasso of truth it will keep burning them until they tell the truth.
She has nice and powerful weapons to protect her.
I think Wonder Woman is responsible for being a superhero .Because she is kind full and friendly that I think she’s the strongest female hero out of all of the heroes.she will not turn her back on us.
This week we were writing a descriptive writing about Wonder Woman and this is mine.
Thursday, 3 May 2018
Term 2 learning goals.
Last week we were doing a term 1 learning goal but now we're doing a term 2 learning goal.
The Duffy Show.
The Duffy Show.
Character.
Ashley-Bully
Duffy had a football tryout today so she was practicing with her best friend Ashley.Their football team was the wolves they were versing the Amazones.
That day was the real football game and Duffy was really terrified that she was vs the Amazons. Then suddenly Duffy heard a bad cry so she went to see who it was.It was Melanie that was crying.
My favourite part was when the dad was looking at the invisible Tv. Also when she always takes her dad’s biscuits. And when the bully and Duffy had toilet paper in there pants.
I like Ashley because she became sensitive when Melania gave her a book called ‘The Halloween Bully’.And when Ashley said ‘’What Clown Baby Do you mean Cry baby’’Also when the ghost said’’Why should you eat you have no guts to.’’
Friday, 13 April 2018
Thursday, 5 April 2018
ANZAC Acrostic Poem.
This week ANZAC is nearly coming up and we were doing a acrostic poem about ANZAC DAY and this is my one.
Tuesday, 27 March 2018
Acrostic poem.
This week Easter is coming we were doing a acrostic poem about Easter and this is my one.
Friday, 23 March 2018
How Maui brought fire to the world.
This week we have been learning learning to retell a myth. I retold How Maui brought fire to the world here is my version of the myth using slides and screen castify.
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