I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo lelei my name is Ema. Thank you for posting the beautiful work you did. Next time it might be better if you won’t repeat egg over again. Why are the easter eggs like emojis??
Kia ora Aza this is Moira. I really love Easter and you reminded me of how great it is. Next time, you should try making the word Easter stand out by changing the colour. Why did you put a space where the word try is?
Talofa Lava my name is Victoria. Thank you for sharing your acrostic easter poem. Add more interesting stuff about easter. Why is your eggs all yellow?
Hi my name is david punga And i like your minion easter eggs because they are cute. But you should check you work before you leave out of it. Next time put more information
Talofa Lava my name is Azahlyah thank you fro saying my minion Easter egg was cute.sorry I can not under stand what you should check you work before you leave out of it.Also I s will add more information next time.
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ReplyDeleteMalo lelei my name is Ema.
Thank you for posting the beautiful work you did.
Next time it might be better if you won’t repeat egg over again.
Why are the easter eggs like emojis??
Hi Ema my name is Azahlyah sorry I used egg to much and I like emoji Easter eggs
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Aza this is Moira.
I really love Easter and you reminded me of how great it is.
Next time, you should try making the word Easter stand out by changing the colour.
Why did you put a space where the word try is?
because it is a acrostic poem and so yous can see the word down wards.
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ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava my name is Victoria.
Thank you for sharing your acrostic easter poem.
Add more interesting stuff about easter.
Why is your eggs all yellow?
Talofa Lava my name is Azahlyah I will add more interesting stuff next time my Easter eggs are yellow because it is a emoji Easter egg.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is david punga
And i like your minion easter eggs because they are cute.
But you should check you work before you leave out of it.
Next time put more information
Talofa Lava my name is Azahlyah thank you fro saying my minion Easter egg was cute.sorry I can not under stand what you should check you work before you leave out of it.Also I s will add more information next time.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is kaiva mila
I like easter .
I love easter eggs
Next time you should add more in formation
Talofa Lava my name is Azahlyah I love Easter too.I am so sorry that I couldn't add any information because the Easter eggs.
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