I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is my favorite because I was at my dads house and I was having a swim with my cousins and it was a very sunny day to go for a swim and it was nice to have on a sunny day.
Kia Ora Azahlyah, It looks like a certainly sunny day, and you seem so happy. I personally really like summer, and it looks like you do too! I am assuming swimming is a favourite summer activity, and so is mine. It's sort of like we have similar thoughts on summer. SUMMER IS SO FUN! Next time maybe you could add in a bit more info about what you did as I don't have much here.
Hello Azahlyah, I am Vitaraag. It looks like swimming is your favorite summer activity. It is mine to. What swimming pool do you go to? I go to Cameron pools. Maybe next time you can say what challenges you like to do while you are swimming. Keep up the amazing work!
I'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey. Reading your post you've done a good job describing your favourite activity and why it's your favourite. Swimming! It's the best time in the year to go out swimming, with a lot of sunny days and hot temperatures! Nice touch on adding a picture to your post :D always adds more content to the post!
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Kia Ora Azahlyah,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like a certainly sunny day, and you seem so happy. I personally really like summer, and it looks like you do too! I am assuming swimming is a favourite summer activity, and so is mine. It's sort of like we have similar thoughts on summer. SUMMER IS SO FUN! Next time maybe you could add in a bit more info about what you did as I don't have much here.
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Hello Azahlyah,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. It looks like swimming is your favorite summer activity. It is mine to. What swimming pool do you go to? I go to Cameron pools. Maybe next time you can say what challenges you like to do while you are swimming. Keep up the amazing work!
Vitaraag
Greetings, Azahlyah!
ReplyDeleteI'm one of the commenters for the Summer Learning Journey. Reading your post you've done a good job describing your favourite activity and why it's your favourite. Swimming! It's the best time in the year to go out swimming, with a lot of sunny days and hot temperatures! Nice touch on adding a picture to your post :D always adds more content to the post!
Keep up the good work!
-Willy