I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 27 October 2017
Week 2 Recount writing
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Me,mum,two siblings and two cousins went to see my dad so I can sleep over my dads.in mangare on the holidays so I can spend some time with him Me,mum and cousins came and say hi and I told mum I want to stay but it was solved a long time ago.
I went inside and said hi to my step cousin's,step uncle and my dad’s sister.We were about to go to otahuhu pools and see my cousin I never saw in a long time I never saw him since my nana's 77th birthday.
When i got home everything was different because the room I sleep in is my mum’s room now and I get mixed up.
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