Friday, 27 October 2017

Week 2 Recount writing

Start writing here Me,mum,two siblings and two cousins went to see my dad so I can sleep over my dads.in mangare on the holidays so I can spend some time with him Me,mum and cousins came and say hi and I told mum I want to stay but it was solved a long time ago. I went inside and said hi to my step cousin's,step uncle and my dad’s sister.We were about to go to otahuhu pools and see my cousin I never saw in a long time I never saw him since my nana's 77th birthday. When i got home everything was different because the room I sleep in is my mum’s room now and I get mixed up.

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