I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azahlyah my name is Dakota form Ahipara School. I like your work about "Inside the earth" it looks very interesting. Next time maybe you could say why you made it. Keep up the interesting work!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Azahlyah this is good piece of work you showed me apart of the earth. Maybe next time you could tell us why you did this work and just explain.
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Hi Azahlyah my name is Dakota form Ahipara School. I like your work about "Inside the earth" it looks very interesting. Next time maybe you could say why you made it. Keep up the interesting work!
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