Descriptive Writing.
The fire fighters.
One afternoon a boy named Harry was a fan of fire fighters.So he got up his courage and asked his mum if he can go to see the fire fighters on his seventh birthday.
Till his mum said ‘‘NO!’’ “we were planning something even better than that”But he was so angry that he was going for a walk to catch his breath and then he brought a pack of matches and set a gigantic bulldozer on fire.Then ran around a corner.
He was so terrified that he ran away and was so scared he was about to cry.He ran home and told his mum what happened but when he was about to say it the mum just turn on the TV and she saw the news and was so terrified too.Harry said “I was going to tell you what happened” and was about to say that he was the one who set fire on the bulldozer.
He apologized and his mum took him to the firefighters to apologize and he had a chance to have ride with them .
This week we were doing a descriptive writing and this is mine.
Kia ora Azahlya,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have used descriptive words like gigantic and terrified. Amazing how he got his wish to see the firefighters in the end. Have you ever visited some firefighters?
Maria