Kia Ora Everyone Yesterday I was helping out Louise's class and we had a Tea Party and it was awesome. Also the juniors were preforming a Kapa Haka and they were playing with the poi's too.
I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, 26 February 2020
HAVING LOTS OF FUN
Kia Ora Everyone Yesterday I was helping out Louise's class and we had a Tea Party and it was awesome. Also the juniors were preforming a Kapa Haka and they were playing with the poi's too.
Tuesday, 25 February 2020
Friday, 21 February 2020
Writing
Descriptive Setting
Make a copy and then write a paragraph describing the picture below
Checklist
I have thought about what this place looks like, and might sound like and feel like.
I have used adjectives (describing words)
I have used adverbs (words that describe a verb/doing word)
I have used figurative language (e.g. similes)
I have used a thesaurus to find more interesting words
I have re-read my writing to check for mistakes.
I see UFO’s everywhere around the city.
I see city breaking down and also places too.
UFO’s taking over the land.
Cloudy and smoke surrounding everyone.
Some city broken and some not .
Search lights finding people or criminals.
Dark lights everywhere so you cant see.
People that is about to die from these bad UFO’s
Wednesday, 19 February 2020
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