Descriptive Setting
Make a copy and then write a paragraph describing the picture below
Checklist
I have thought about what this place looks like, and might sound like and feel like.
I have used adjectives (describing words)
I have used adverbs (words that describe a verb/doing word)
I have used figurative language (e.g. similes)
I have used a thesaurus to find more interesting words
I have re-read my writing to check for mistakes.
I see UFO’s everywhere around the city.
I see city breaking down and also places too.
UFO’s taking over the land.
Cloudy and smoke surrounding everyone.
Some city broken and some not .
Search lights finding people or criminals.
Dark lights everywhere so you cant see.
People that is about to die from these bad UFO’s
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