Friday, 21 February 2020

Writing

Descriptive Setting Make a copy and then write a paragraph describing the picture below Checklist I have thought about what this place looks like, and might sound like and feel like. I have used adjectives (describing words) I have used adverbs (words that describe a verb/doing word) I have used figurative language (e.g. similes) I have used a thesaurus to find more interesting words I have re-read my writing to check for mistakes.



 I see UFO’s everywhere around the city. I see city breaking down and also places too. UFO’s taking over the land. Cloudy and smoke surrounding everyone. Some city broken and some not . Search lights finding people or criminals. Dark lights everywhere so you cant see. People that is about to die from these bad UFO’s

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