I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Azahlyah I enjoyed watching your blog post it was very good. Next time you could write about what you had to do and what you learn. Kai pai Azahlyah you did a great job. Lailani
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Azahlyah I enjoyed watching your blog post it was very good. Next time you could write about what you had to do and what you learn. Kai pai Azahlyah you did a great job. Lailani
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