I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 31 August 2017
Great white shark
The Great white shark.
The great white shark is very dangerous.
He moves secretly so he can hunt.
He’s 100 inches long.
It has a huge mouth that can fit 50 fish inside his mouth and he just swallow like a grape.
It lives in the seabed all the way at the end.
It’s dorsal fin are so so pointy that no one can touch it.
It’s so evil that if a fish comes swimming around it can get eaten.
It’s color is white on his stomach and grey around his neck and some grey on his tail.
I love the shark because he is so scary.
By Azahlyah Room.5 2017
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