I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 1 September 2017
My Kitten.
KITTENS Descriptive Writing
Kittens are such lovely and wonderful creatures and they are just the cutest little things on earth.
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Their tiny bodies are covered in lovely fluffy fur that is so nice to touch. Their eyes are bright and they are full of mischief. You can almost hear their eyes say, “Come and play with me please, I’m so cute.”
zx.z.They have little pointy ears that listen to every sound. Their little claws are so shape but they are so gentle. And I love their little tails that they seem to chase all day long.
Kittens move around so quietly and they like jumping out and attacking you as you walk past. They make little squeaky noises because they haven’t learnt to meow yet.
Kittens love climbing and chasing anything that moves. And they love leaving little messy smelly presents around the house. Be sure to TRAIN your kitten.
I love little kittens; they are so much fun and such a gorgeous pet. Would you love a pet kitten?
My Puppy
My puppy’s name’s are Dezel and
My puppy's are so beautiful handsome and lovely.
They play fetch the ball and runs at the park.
They sound like a chiwawa squeaking.
It looks like a cub lion.
Ihere eyes are darkish blackish.
There ears are floppy.
There legs are like paddle pop ice blocks.
They eats dog roll,and dog jelly.
It’s body colour is blonde.
They move so softly.
I love my puppy because they are beautiful and handsome.
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