Friday, 8 September 2017

thank you star dome.

Azahlyah Edmund Hillary School 1 Hunua Road. Papakura, Auckland. Thursday 7 September 2017 Dear Star dome, Thank you for teaching us about space so we can learn more about space. Thank you for using your pleasure time teaching us about space and also telling us what the moon and Other planets are made out of. I love the part when we get to lie down in these deep chairs and look up it even had cup holders. But I Fall to sleep. I was nearly sleeping But the movie was finished and I wanted to go toilet. what I learnt before the trip was that earth is the only planet we can live on. I would like to say thank You for giving us free tickets to go back to Star dome and learn about space Again and might watch a different movie and not A cartoon movie. Click Here to watch the song.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous26 September 2017 at 12:30

    hi aza it's zac here i really like this thank you letter because you have a neat and tidy sentences and i like that you did't rush to finish and not worry about the detail and to make it look fansy.

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