I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, 19 September 2017
The gruffalo
The gruffalo.
The gruffalo has a hilarious ugly and stinky poisonous wart,Two bendable horns.Sharp purple freckles like razors.
Crooked teeth going up and down.
A friend that lies that he’s not scared of anyone,Sharp claws.greased knobbly knees.Orange eyes like he was hunting for food,He has razord toenails.A holarios brown tail .A scary black
Tongue.
A friend that lies to people that the
Gruffalo likes to eat them but he made
Up their name but just rhyming with there name. Saying it has a terrible
tusk.
And he’s a scary terrified Gruffalo! Click Here if you want to see the video.
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Hi Aza, there are some great describing words in this writing. You need to be careful about copying and pasting from the internet. It is okay to use other peoples ideas but you need to put them in your own words to show you understand.
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